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Check out my poem

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My love for you is endless
Like the seven seas.
Let's do something mindless
While nobody sees.
I wouldn't even mind to please.

For you to see my faithfulness
I dare to say i love your sister less.
She wouldn't catch us nonetheless.

My words are sharp indeed,
But even more my tongue.
Would like to pierce your mango.

(My native language is russian so don't destroy my anus too much, if it's bad, than just say it)


| The rhyming is cute. The rhythm's kinda off. The sentiment's too ehhhh for me, but that's a personal opinion.

It's fine, I think.


| >>496121 damn son where you found this I borrow cuz I like it lel>;3 p. S. This make me reminds me before be heartless

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