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Wall of text but not a rant
| "Hey, isn't mind reading illegal? You can spend 10 incarnations as stone for that." But then Tumelo saw a subtle smile on the old man's face and thought to himself, a little more secretly how far away he is from the real understanding of the True Meaning.
| Ok I have no idea why I'm sharing this here I just sat yesterday and wrote it (first thing I ever do) I had an interesting scene in my head with this and decided to do something with it, so here it is. Now I don't really know a legit place where this should belong neither do I know if it's decent or straight trash, other than that I don't have friends to share this (well my only friend hasn't replied in a week so..) soo yeah here it is, quite embarrassing tbh
| Just tell me anything honesty I haven't felt anything in days, so if you manage to trigger any sort of emotion in me that would be great, even if it's suicidal, that do be best honestly
| Nice
| Why isn't the punishment for mind reading crucification?
| >>387325 it got old, everybody did it, now it's just lame, beeing a conscious stone for life is the new trend
| 3rd? I count >>9bcaf0 >>dfc2c2 >>1f2229 >>949a8a four. Who do I trust anymore. Is>>387366 actually not OP so it is actually 3?
Anyway, there're some spelling and grammar mistakes and odd wording that made it a bit weird to read, but is good.
| >start a story with "they" where the reader has to do the fucking guesswork about what the fuck is going on
what the hell is wrong with you people ?
| >>387425 oh yeah I guess they are 4 lol, there are probably quite a bit of mistakes and my vocabulary is not huge. Thanks for pointing that out!
| >>387445 well I'm sure I read it somewhere before and there is half a sentence before that, but if you can elaborate what exactly you are confused about it will definitely help me improve!
| Lol I'm back on this id now that's amazing
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| He looked down from the dull rock they were standing on,above the planet was a thick layer of clouds, it looked like a white, fluffy ocean. The sun was just rising above this ocean prolonging it's light beams at a perfect angle in Tumelo's view.
"So that's what life is all about! - Beuty" - he thought.
"But beauty is so subjective young one. For some it's the imperfections that are beautiful opposite to what this white ocean make you feel." - said the old Visionery.